think the loop itself is solid, especially the way it builds up. maybe more percussive variation? know you said itβs older so you might already think that.
think the loop itself is solid, especially the way it builds up. maybe more percussive variation? know you said itβs older so you might already think that.
Thanks for the input and the 4 stars. :) after my volunteering at the Oxfam shop in town I'll jump on the laptop and have a fiddle with some background percussion.
Have a great day! :)
that bass line is great. part at 1:45 is my favorite
Thank you :)
I think you nailed the theme. Bass is really cool and the production is nice. Did you record the audio at the beginning yourself or is it a sample?
i wish i had a powerful recorder to record the footsteps. those are samples i recorded and cutted
deranged :) the vocals really grew on me actually
Thanks dude πββοΈ
This is actually really amazing, might be my favorite track of yours so far honestly. Everything here is just really wonderful, especially the chorus. That chorus is stuck in my head and it's honestly killing me. Your music is really evocative and I know that you don't really consider yourself a musician, but you really should. This is more music than a lot of people will ever come close to creating in their life. all you need is your voice and your guitar, and that's a blessing. I hope someday someone offers to record you with amazing equipment because your songwriting deserves it. seriously.
Aw thanks a lot mane, I don't really know what to really say other than thanks a lot for the kind words
The choir thing that comes in around the 40 sec mark is really cool and kinda lifts the rest of the track, same thing when the vocal thing comes in around 1 minute. The solo is nice too if a bit simple, but it is the little ideas that you have peppered throughout that really keep my interest. Needs a bit more, with some more variation in the bass line and you have a really cool lil track. I know you said it's unfinished but i think it is worth continuing some more.
It's just a scratch track but thanks for the review anyway! The choir thing is actually VSTi Mellotron.
this is cool and the lead melody is catchy, but i do think it needs a bit more variation. The ending feels kinda lackluster as well. But overall it does have a lot of energy and i can imagine a video game having this music
Thank you very much for your feedback!
ending is a bit abrupt but I think the main loop is pretty cool sounding. The strings that show up are really nice and add a cool dimension to it. I do think it needs a little bit more variation if it were to be playing in a game for a longer time, and the break in the middle kinda helps, but maybe an extra instrument in the mix would help liven it up, or more drum fills. It's nice tho!
Thanks for the review
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